Hello Dear Students,
I hope you hava had a productive week, so far. This week I only have one question for you to reflect upon: What was the hardest part for you when writing the first draft of your descriptive essay?
I am looking forward to reading your comments.
See you in class!!
Prof. Ramos
Hello, professor. According to this week question, I sincerely have to say that my hardest part for me in writing my draft was working on the outline, since that I could not get it when you explained how to organize ideas, and put them in a certain order so that it make easier to develop the draft.
ReplyDeletehello everybody , sincerely all this process has been pretty hard. Maybe I am not that clear about the process.
ReplyDeleteHi, describe a person is difficult, but the hardest part for me was to describe how that person treat others, because every single person have different fellings and can be rude or friendly and quiet and sometimes restless. honestly describe is hard from beginning to end.
ReplyDeleteThe hardest thing for me is the grammar because it´s very important when you writing a draft.
ReplyDeletethe hardest part for me to write this essay was:
ReplyDelete1- thing about the characteristics to describe the person who I chose
2- the order of the descritions.. fisical appearance, how is this person, why is important for me...
these are the hardest part for me in this descriptive essay...
well, for me the part that im
ReplyDeletestill confused is the organization of the ideas,and Be concise.I hope to do my best effort.
the hardest part for me to make my writing was to put the ideas in order, it's difficult to think and to write at he same moment and taking care of grammar too.
ReplyDeleteThe descriptive essay is a genre of essay that asks the student to describe something that can be an object, person, place, experience, emotion, situation, etc. I had few troubles to write my descriptive essay. First, when I had to start describing my mom. I didn’t know how to start describing first, if I needed to begin describing from the head to the body or from the body to the head. At the end of thinking a lot on that I started describing the head, it included all its parts like the hair and the eyes. Then I added information about how she looks. In this part my trouble was result. Second, how to describe her personality. It was a little difficult to me because the personality of my mom I is so wonderful that I can’t explain, but I could find some words and values that I could use to describe her. Third, describe the roll of my mom as a good mother. I had to think all the moments that I had shared with mom and I could describe some of them. I can say that my mom is my teacher, my best friend, my doctor, my counselor, my all. Finally, these were my little hard part in my essay and when I found an idea, I could do my brainstorming without trobles.
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